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Cats and Girls by bcnyArt Cats and Girls by bcnyArt
I did many attempts in this illustration. I seriously considered whether or not to blur the background. It's the final result.
Hope you'll like it: )

In my pixiv page there are the processes of this illustration and its version without characters, if you are interested, welcome to visit!
www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
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vanillaorangelatte Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oops I posted critique as comment, sorry my mistake. Could repost it if you'd like.

Forgot to add.
Overall you catched the "movement" very good, now the time to improve it.
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vanillaorangelatte Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it's a a nice picture, and since you requested critique:

The point of attention of this picture should be the near girl and her cats, but strangely when looking at it -  the attention goes into the center of the picture to the blurry houses.

Why? Maybe because

Dark girl onto dark background, she blends in too deeply
 
The left down corner looks empty, some small detail there like box, plant or another cat(s) near the girl (grey, orange or white to balance the cool  athmosphere) would bring attention to this part of the picture.

Girl and cats are very detailed, but the stones beneath her feet are painted roughly, like they are far away, would be nice to add there some minor details like cracks, thin shadows, grass roots or maybe flowers etc. 

Also the sky look.. sorta empty. Adding some (light) clouds or more visible gradient would fill it.

The houses at the back are overblurred, something like that we can observe only when heavy fog is occured while on picture we are observing noon and perfect weather.

The girl far away is blend into heavy shadow with her dark dress too, if not for her hair  -  we would not see her at all.

Details, more details.

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Hope it helps.
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Zeonista Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Kittehs!! Heart  Also some attempt for dynamic action which is appreciated.
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imperial-standard Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Composition and artwork in general is good, but you need to work more on your anatomy I guess - the pose of the girl in the foreground left does not feel very natural.
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BorderBreaker Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist
Excellent layout! The blur gives a great sense of atmosphere and depth and helps keep the attention in the foreground where it should be, and bouncing between the two main figures. Great work!
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AzureRat Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is some great illustration.
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Cestarian Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is too low res :( I can hardly even see this.
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LightRealm Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!?!
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TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Awesome
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JamtRaven Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The background reminds me alot of Sweden. Except the blur ofcourse.
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