Exorcist Teacher volume5 cover

overall I would say this work is a success. It exhibits great understanding of lighting, color, and composition, and only a few very, very minor issues. the first that I see is that the magic wall doesn't read too well right off the bat. When i first saw this, I assumed the students were ghosts or some kind of spirits because they have a lack of opacity. I would like to see that orange line in the wall be a little less prominent and the student's color pushed forward just a little bit, nothing drastic. in addition, It's very easily read as the girl is fighting the teacher because he is pointing directly at her and clearly casting some form of spell. I understand that his pointing is a compositional element meant to point the viewer's attention in her direction, but it also throws the immediate read off.finally, I would like to see the chairs in the foreground a little more renderred than their current state and some of the bloody writing on the back wall seems a little too fluorescent and that makes them read at in the foreground, not lying on a wall in the background.. some darker, browner reds could fix that.

overall, highly satisfying, clearly well done work with only a few minor suggestions!