Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka?

Let's start on a positive note: The posture feels natural and the reclining perspective is laid out well. It's also a treat to know that you drew in Shiroari's or Shiro-chan's multi-pupil eyes and the playful expression on her face.

As for the corrections I wish to see, her bust is supposed to be "meatier" *ahem*. She was mentioned in the web novel to be in second place of the most well-endowed characters in the story. Aside from the bust issue, her body should also be a little less muscular and more dainty/slender looking.

Overall, I find it a refreshing render of the character and enjoy the relaxed feel that the piece gives off.