Sheep with a Girl

Very, very scenic artwork. However there's a lack of contrast between the background and the focus (which is the girl in the foreground) - if you can touch up by bringing both the Background color and line work into a more faded finish, you will definitely achieve a more stunning look..

I really like the costume details however and this is a very strong point of yours. Also, you may want to put stronger shadows on the foreground characters (sheep, and girls) as well as additional details on the floor tiles.

Other than this your scene is very well planned and pleasing to look at.